You seem to have a clear goal of your career pathway becoming an assistant coach in a football team. You outlined your beliefs and values such as creativity and repour building with people. It would have been nice to explore these beliefs and values more to delve deep into the reasons why you feel this way. Your clip on the brief looked to be 2-3 minutes yours was 1 minute 40 seconds leaving a lot of opportunity for expansion on your points. Utilise the time you have more effectively.
You seem to have a clear goal of your career pathway becoming an assistant coach in a football team. You outlined your beliefs and values such as creativity and repour building with people. It would have been nice to explore these beliefs and values more to delve deep into the reasons why you feel this way. Your clip on the brief looked to be 2-3 minutes yours was 1 minute 40 seconds leaving a lot of opportunity for expansion on your points. Utilise the time you have more effectively.
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